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Thursday, September 11, 2025

If You Want to Write a Story, written and illustrated by Jeff Mack. Neal Porter Books, Holiday House. Penguin Random House, 2025. $25.99 ages

 


"Good stories have all kinds of feelings. 

Happy parts. 

Sad parts. 

Even homesick parts. 

That's why we care 
what happens from 
beginning to end.

If you are a writer, or have tried to write a story, you will empathize with the tiny mouse who graces the title page of this appealing and informative book from the prolific Jeff Mack. Using second-person voice, he does all he can to encourage said mouse to put pen to paper. 

Sitting at a table, rejected beginnings surrounding it, the mouse looks in need of support and advice. First, says the narrator, an idea is needed. Finding one should prove easy. A stuffed rabbit becomes the idea to chase from place to place, never letting it escape. A hint of an idea is definitely needed before there is a chance to consider where the story will begin. 

There's really no way of knowing where it might lead, but it is worth being patient while waiting. Next is the plan, which can be explored going forward. Is there excitement? Is there a problem to solve? It's hard work, and can be very tiring. Giving in to fatigue is not the answer. Keep believing you are making progress, even when the going gets even tougher. The story belongs to the writer. 

There are many turns it might take. All will help as one problem after another is considered, and the story refined. Be strong, enjoy the surprises along the way. Be positive. When it comes to the ending, accept help. Finally, it's ready to be shared. 

Are you ready to write another? The steps for getting a story onto the page are clear, the illustrations are full of color and action, the ending provides encouragement to take what has been learned and begin again. It can be done! 

                                                                                             


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